考前 10 分钟可用的六级写作技巧
四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地,阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们
的用词和句型的使用。
高分作文标志
1) 四级 120-150 字;六级 150-180 字;
2) 是否长短句交叉;
3) 用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4) 关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1. 适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用 we / I (比如
写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾
2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches
were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened
effectively.
2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、
动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词
后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good,
bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable 代替 proper,
approaches 代替 ways, implement 代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge 代替 enhance
one’’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14 分)的例子,看看他是如何运用
各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作
文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as
birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in
googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic
music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting
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