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三、摘要1.摘要是一片论文的总结,一般为250字左右。2. 陈述论文研究的主要目的和范围,研究采用的方法,总结研究结果,给出研究得出的主要结论。3. 不能出现论
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英语论文写作
学 习 心 得 体 会
学 院 材料科学与工程
专 业 材料工程
班 级 19 级材料一班
姓 名 张原硕
学 号 S20190401
《英文论文写作》学习心得体会
一、资料收集
1. 阅读大量相关博士论文、该研究方向的前沿期刊、学术会议文献集等,
对该研究方向有一个宏观的整体认识了解。
2. 通过 CARSI 校外访问知网、万方、爱思唯尔、Springer 等数据库资源。
二、论文题目
1. 不应过长或过短,一般为 8~15 个实词(介词和连词除外)。
2. 论文题目一般为名词,不能采用动宾短语或其他句型。
3. 概括要尽可能精准,尽量突出论文中的重要内容,避免题目空泛和语法
错误。
举例如下:
(1) 论 文 题 目 “An Interatomic Potential of Li-Mn-O System and Molecular Dynamics
Simulations on Li Diffusion in Spinel Li1-xMn2O4” ( 出 自 Lee E , Lee K R , Lee B J . An
Interatomic Potential of Li-Mn-O System and Molecular Dynamics Simulations on Li Diffusion in
Spinel Li 1- x Mn 2 O 4[J]. The Journal of Physical Chemistry C, 2017, 121(24). )
(2) 论 文 题 目 “Calculation of native defect energies in α-A12O3 and α-Cr2O3 using a
modified Matsui potential”(出自 Sun J , Stirner T , Matthews A . Calculation of native defect
energies in α-A12O3 and α-Cr2O3 using a modified Matsui potential[J]. Surface and Coatings
Technology, 2006, 201(7):4201–4204. )
(3) 论 文 题 目 “Molecular dynamics simulation of the (0 0 0 1) a-Al2O3 and a-Cr2O3
surfaces”(出自 Jizhong Sun, T. Stirner, A. Matthews. Molecular dynamics simulation of the (0 0
0 1) α-Al2O3 and α-Cr2O3 surfaces[J]. 2007, 601(5):1358-1364.)
点评:以上三篇文献论文题目实词分别为 11、10、9 个;题目均选用名词。
概括精准,突出了论文的重要内容,见名知意。
三、摘要
1. 摘要是一片论文的总结,一般为 250 字左右。
2. 陈述论文研究的主要目的和范围,研究采用的方法,总结研究结果,给
出研究得出的主要结论。
3. 不能出现论文中没有的信息和结论,不能引用参考文献,不能出现表格
和图片,不能包含过多细节信息,要字斟句酌。
举例如下:
(1) 论 文 摘 要 “Alumina and chromia are very important materials in the surface coatings
industry, e.g. for corrosion protection and as catalyst supports. The type of defects and the
associated formation energy in these materials are of direct relevance to the surface stability and
reaction kinetics. In the present work, a modified Matsui potential is applied to calculate the native
point defect energies in α-Al2O3 and α-Cr2O3 based on the Mott–Littleton theory. Particular
attention is paid to the convergence of the defect energies with the number of atoms surrounding
the defect. The results show that the relative values of the defect formation energies are such that
the Schottky energy is smaller than either of the Frenkel energies, which is in agreement with
experimental data and recent results of first-principles calculations. The implications of these
findings for diffusion mechanisms and the associated reaction kinetics are discussed briefly.”(出
自 Sun J , Stirner T , Matthews A . Calculation of native defect energies in α-A12O3 and α-Cr2O3
using a modified Matsui potential[J]. Surface and Coatings Technology, 2006, 201(7):4201–
4204. )
(2) 论文摘要“A simple, rigid pair-potential model is applied to investigate the dynamics of
the (0 0 0 1) a-Al2O3 and a-Cr2O3 surfaces using the molecular dynamics technique. The
simulations employ a two-stage equilibration process: in the first stage the simulation-cell size is
determined via the constant-stress ensemble, and in the second stage the equilibration of the
size-corrected simulation cell is continued in the canonical ensemble. The thermal expansion
coefficients of bulk alumina and chromia are evaluated as a function of temperature. Furthermore,
the surface relaxation and mean-square displacement of the atoms versus depth into the slab are
calculated, and their behaviour in the surface region analysed in detail. The calculations show that
even moderate temperatures (400 C) give rise to displacements of the atoms at the surface which
are similar to the lattice mismatch between a-alumina and chromia. This will help in the initial
nucleation stage during thin film growth, and thus facilitate the deposition of a-Al2O3 on (0 0 0 1)
a-Cr2O3 templates. ” ( 出 自 Jizhong Sun, T. Stirner, A. Matthews. Molecular dynamics
simulation of the (0 0 0 1) α-Al2O3 and α-Cr2O3 surfaces[J]. 2007, 601(5):1358-1364.)
(3) 论 文 摘 要 “Although high-entropy alloys (HEAs) are attracting interest, the physical
metallurgical mechanisms related to their properties have mostly not been clarified, and this limits
wider industrial applications, in addition to the high alloy costs. We clarify the physical
metallurgical reasons for the materials phenomena (sluggish diffusion and micro-twining at
cryogenic temperatures) and investigate the effect of individual elements on solid solution
hardening for the equiatomic CoCrFeMnNi HEA based on atomistic simulations (Monte Carlo,
molecular dynamics and molecular statics). A significant number of stable vacant lattice sites with
high migration energy barriers exists and is thought to cause the sluggish diffusion. We predict
that the hexagonal close-packed (hcp) structure is more stable than the face-centered cubic (fcc)
structure at 0 K, which we propose as the fundamental reason for the micro-twinning at cryogenic
temperatures. The alloying effect on the critical resolved shear stress (CRSS) is well predicted by
the atomistic simulation, used for a design of non-equiatomic fcc HEAs with improved strength,
and is experimentally verified. This study demonstrates the applicability of the proposed atomistic
approach combined with a thermodynamic calculation technique to a computational design of
advanced HEAs.” ( 出 自 Choi W M , Jo Y H , Sohn S S , et al. Understanding the physical
metallurgy of the CoCrFeMnNi high-entropy alloy: An atomistic simulation study[J]. 2018.)
点评:以上三篇文献论文摘要均控制在 250 词左右,均简明扼要的陈述了研
究目的、实验方法并给出了主要实验结果,只看摘要便可知此篇文献论文的大部
分类容。
四、引言
1. 引言应该说明作者开展科研的原因,要简明扼要的陈述写作目的,研究
方向的优点与不足、体现自己的研究领域和国内外现状、展现创新性。
2. 明确指出采用的研究方法,必要时应指出采用该特定研究方法的原因。
3. 陈述主要的研究结果并指出由研究结果得出的主要结论。
4. 参考文献要近些年或早期经典,并且水平要高,中心期刊以上。
举例如下:
(1) Alumina and chromia are very important materials in the surface coatings industry, e.g.
for corrosion protection, catalyst supports, dielectric insulators, etc. The type of defects and the
associated formation energy in these materials are of great importance for atomic transport and
mechanical properties, and are of direct relevance to the surface stability and reaction kinetics.
Within the constraints of charge neutrality and stoichiometry, only two types of native point
defects are allowed in α-A12O3 and α-Cr2O3, i.e. Schottky and Frenkel defects. There are
numerous theoretical studies on these intrinsic point defects in the corundum-type crystals, e.g.
A12O3 (Refs. [1–4]), Cr2O3 (Refs. [4–6]) and Fe2O3 (Refs. [4,5,7]). Most of these studies
employed the same empirical shell model [8] (albeit with different parameter sets) combined with
the Mott–Littleton approximation [9], although Catlow et al. [2,5] and Lawrence [6] also carried
out calculations with an interatomic potential from a modified form of the electron-gas
approximation. Very recently, first-principles calculations have been performed for intrinsic
defects in α-A12O3 [10]. However, there is still some controversy over the dominant defect type
in α -A12O3. Some calculations [2,3] indicate that oxygen Frenkel defects have a lower
formation energy than Schottky defects, while others [1,2,4,10] come to the opposite conclusion.
As pointed out by Catlow et al. [2], this may in part be due to the difference in potential
parameters used for describing the properties of α -A12O3. As mentioned above, to date the
Mott–Littleton approximation has been the predominant method to carry out calculations of
defect energies. In contrast to first-principles calculations, the main advantages of the Mott–
Littleton method are its easy implementation and low computational cost. In general, it is thought
that approximately 100 atoms around a defect are sufficient for a convergence of the Mott–
Littleton calculations [2]. However, about 40 atoms or less were also used to calculate defect
energies [1,4]. Hence, it is necessary to examine the convergence of the results when the Mott–
Littleton method is used. In a previous paper [11] we developed a very simple potential from the
model put forward by Matsui [12], which can describe the structure and lattice energy of α
-A12O3 very well. This “modified” Matsui model is very similar to shell models, except that in
the latter a point charge is separated into a shell and a core. The shell is attached to the core by a
spring and the overlap of shells results in a short-range repulsion. This modification leads to
several additional parameters in the interaction potential, which requires at least the same number
of experimental observables for their parameterisation [13]. In the present paper we will transfer
this modified Matsui potential from α-A12O3 to α-Cr2O3 in order to calculate the native point
defect energies for both crystals. The convergence of the calculations using the Mott–Littleton
approximation will be tested, the predicted order of native defect energies in stoichiometric α
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