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四 级 冲 刺 讲 义
海文英语教研室
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四级分值结构
测试内容 测试题型 比例
短对话 多项选择 听力对话
长对话 多项选择
15%
多项选择
听力理解
听力短文
复合式听写
20%
35%
多项选择 仔细阅读理解
选词填空或简答题
25% 阅读理解
快速阅读理解 是非判断+
句子填空或其他
10%
35%
完型填空 完型填空 多项选择 10% 10%
写作 短文写作 15% 写作和翻
译
翻译 汉译英 5%
20%
海文英语四级模板作文小结
2007 年英语四级考试已经临近，为了帮助考四级的学员顺利通过此次考试，海文英语室为
大家提供了一部分优秀的四级作文模板，希望学员能充分利用一下，顺利通过考试。
四级作文中的议论文主要有四个类型分别是：原因分析型、问题解决型、对比选择型以
及观点论证型。现将这四种类型文章的段落分布情况，每段要点及常用模板介绍如下。
写作
一. 原因分析型
文章基本可以分为三个部分即：
描述现象引出问题-----分析现象产生的原因-----总结其优点及弊端
第一段
1.With the development of society, the problem of 现象 has aroused nation wide attention among
public. 现象表现
第二段
2.To the best of my knowledge, several reasons can be identified to account for this 现象
3.In the first place 原因 1
4.In the second 原因 2
5.Last but not the least 原因 3
第三段
6.As far as I am concerned 优点
7.For all the advantages mentioned above, 现象 is by no means without its limitation.
8.缺点
二. 问题解决型
文章基本可以分为三个部分即：
提出解决问题的必要性-----分析现象产生的原因-----提出解决办法
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第一段
Recently, there has been a growing concern among the public over the
issue/problem/situation/phenomenon that 问题
So far is has generated serious negative effects on society/our life
第二段
To the best of my understanding, there are several reasons accounting for this
First of all, owing to 原因，结果
What is more, 结果 due to 原因
第三段
From what has been discussed above, it is sensible we take effective and efficient measures to
solve the problem
For one thing, 办法一
For another, 办法二
Only in this way can we 对将来预测（positive）
三. 对比选择型
文章基本可以分为四个部分即：
对一个问题存在两种对立的看法-----第一种观点----另一种观点-----我的观点
第一段
Recently, there has been a growing concern among the public over the issue/problem whether we
should 讨论的问题
opinions vary from person to person
第二段
Some people take it for granted that 第一类人的观点
In their opinion, 第一类人认为
第三段
On the contrary, other people stand on a different ground.第二类人的观点
They maintain that 第二类人认为
第四段（此段可完全照搬）
To the best of my knowledge, it is sensible for us to take a rational attitude towards this 问题
For my part, I do believe the 优点/缺点 outweigh its negative/positive effects.
From all the points discussed above, it is preferable that we make the most of the advantages and
meanwhile reduce the negative effects to the minimum
四. 观点论证型
文章基本可以分为三个部分即：
首先提出要论证的论点-----对论点进行论证-----表明自己的立场
第一段
It is well known that 论点
The truth is deep and profound
No one can deny that 重申论点
第二段
There are many remarkable factors/reasons contributing to this argument
To begin with 原因一
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What is more 原因二
Last but not the least 原因三
第三段
All mentioned above tell us that 重申论点
Therefore, there is no denying that 正确的做法和态度
In short 总结
写作常见的问题
一． 不一致
例：When one have money, he can do what he want to .
剖析：one 是单数第三人称，因而本句的 have 应改为 has ;同理，want 应改为 wants.本句是
典型的主谓不一致．改为： Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二． 修
饰语错位
例． I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析：better 位置不当，应置于句末．
三． 句子不完整
例． There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，
仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspaper.
四． 悬垂修饰语
例：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten＂
改为： When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例． To do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析：句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚．
改为： To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五． 词性误用
例． None can negative the importance of money.
剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为： None can deny the importance of money.
六． 指代不清
例. Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
剖析：玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地
判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明
确，意思就一目了然了。
改为： Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析：句中人称代词 we 和反身代词 yourself 指代不一致。
改为： We can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七． 不间断句子
例． There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“There are many ways.” 以及“We get to know the
outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为： There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或： There are many ways
through which we can become acquainted with the outside world
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八． 措词问题
例１． The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化
学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)
剖析：显然，考生把 obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作 substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing
use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。
改为： The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九． 累赘
例： In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
剖析：本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可
以
改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him.
例． For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing
they need.
剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。
改为： Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十． 不连贯
例． The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析：The fresh water 与逗号后的 it 不连贯。It 与 things 在数方面不一致。
改为： Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一. 关于有的表达不当
例. There are many people think
Problem have been more and more
十二. 时态错误混乱
例. I did not expect he will come
十三. 比较级错误
例. The society is changing more and more faster
十四：中式思维错误
When we meet difficulties, we must keep calm (meet with, encounter)
If this situation continues, children will be very dangerous(in danger)
I adventure to write this letter (venture)
My hometown will must become very beautiful (definitely)
When we touch the other people in the society (are in contact with)
We should do from ourselves (we are supposed to do our parts\do our own bit\ make our due
contribution)
十五. 拼写错误
environment government recommend permitted modern nowadays
阅读技巧
一．常出现考点的地方（应仔细阅读的部分）
1、列举处常考
列举处指的是 First, ..., Second ,..., Third,..., 等并列关系词出现的部分。要求考生从列举出
的内容中 , 选出符合题干要求的答案项。列举方式有时不用数字排序 , 而是采取句式排比
的方式进行。
2、 举例与打比方的地方常考
为了使自己的观点更具有说服力，更加明确 ，作者常以具体的例子来佐证。这些例子或
